Talk:Lois Lowry

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Tone issues[edit]

Most of this article reads like a autobiography or a profile in a news source, and not like a encyclopedia article. e.g. "It was during this coursework that she was introduced to photography, which became a lifelong passion as well as a profession." CrocodilesAreForWimps (talk) 19:17, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

Clovermoss (talk) 21:29, 14 April 2019 (UTC)

Editing Article for Organization and Tone[edit]

Hi there! I'm a student in a technical editing course this semester, and I will be working on this article for the next couple of weeks. I will mostly be focusing my revisions on the organization of the article, and on editing content to comply with standards for a Biograohy of a living person (WP:BLP). I do not think the tone issue has been resolved; there are still lines which read more like an autobiography than an encyclopedia, and which do not completely convey a neutral tone. I will also work on rearranging some of the information in the article; I think, for example, that the "Early life" and "Early career" sections could be merged into one section, perhaps titled "Personal life" or something along those lines. Please free to talk to me about any changes I make, or if you have any other concerns, input, or suggestions! Grace Rohan (talk) 21:46, 29 February 2020 (UTC)